Attention for this important message please
Posted by jen November 10th, 2006 in Bitchin' Haikus. 1 CommentI have bought some new slippers.
Now it feels as if
I am walking on the moon.
(I wasn’t intending to write that in haiku form, but once I had it down I realized it worked…![]()
That is all.
Edit: Someone mentioned I messed up my haiku form… did 7-5-7 and it’s 5-7-5… so let’s do this again…
Bought some new slippers,
Feels like walking on the Moon,
Moonwalking is fun!
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I think that’s reverse haiku…
Regular haiku is 5-7-5, equally 17 syllables.
How about…
New slippers on my
feet emulate walking on
the moon – NEIL ARMSTRONG!
:-D